To travel to Matheran you need to park your car below and catch a tram that takes you up the hill. The place is so beautiful, it has wildlife, monkeys, scenery to die for and most of all it's peaceful. You feel at one with the earth, it's like mother nature planted a kiss on the cheek of the mountain and you can feel the after effects of her love.
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I felt the peace here, you took me on an enlightened journey, lulls you into a harmonious state of being with the majesty of that mountain. The music adds to the ambiance of it all...touching upon more than one sense with this read. You've made it so tangible, I can practically breathe the fresh air within your work.
'The wild horses run free
Like a scarf floating in the breeze
The flowers playfully wink at me
As they sway in rhythm to the buzzing bees'
Winking flowers, love it! You are growing as a poet in leaps and bounds my friend...just lovely. Can't say more.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humble.. read moreI love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humbled to have someone as talented and experienced as you review my work and compliment it. Just pull an eat pray love and come down to India already :D
This is beautiful Keegan. Absolutely beautiful. The views and reviews prove that andot is one of those poems which sort of take one to that place which the poet is describing. It really is blisdful and the font colour just adds to the wonderful experience for me.
And is this Matheran in the Himachal Pradesh?
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, i'm all smiles that this poem is appreciated as for me its a poem that actually reminds m.. read moreThank you, i'm all smiles that this poem is appreciated as for me its a poem that actually reminds me of the place I would visit on school trips when I was a child. Matheran is a hill station in Maharashtra. West Coast of India. I'm so happy you took the time to read my work, for that kindness i'm truly grateful.
11 Years Ago
The pleasure was mine, trust me. And I guessed it could be in the North, given the green and the clo.. read moreThe pleasure was mine, trust me. And I guessed it could be in the North, given the green and the clouds.:-):-):-D.
11 Years Ago
Are you Indian? :D or familiar with India? perhaps visited before? < 3
11 Years Ago
Yeah i've been there quite a few times....know some stuff about it and just adore it. Do u live ther.. read moreYeah i've been there quite a few times....know some stuff about it and just adore it. Do u live therr?
11 Years Ago
Yeah I'm from Mumbai, India. :p that's real cool that you've visited a few times ^_^
Mumbai seems fascinating. I'd like to go there sometime:-).
11 Years Ago
Oh for sure, it's not much different from any other busy city but it has it's moments, its fine beau.. read moreOh for sure, it's not much different from any other busy city but it has it's moments, its fine beautiful moments. If you're ever down, crash by for a meal or tea or something :D
11 Years Ago
Oky thanks:-).
I was home too here, will come to India one day, and be guided as you describe here, such a inspiring people you are, rich of mind, and full of passion, in nature, and beauty all around. And all the old wisdoms, So refreshing this is! The music, sets me deeply to zen, as I love it. Lovely work my friend... :)
I love the mood of this. You did an excellent job of creating this image. Man, do I love the sitar.
This seems like it was very well thought out. Every word, every line seems to fit perfectly into place. I don't know if that was intentional, or if this is just how it seemed to flow. Regardless, it's great.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Carly, I haven't checked my read requests lately but looking forward to reading your new stor.. read moreThanks Carly, I haven't checked my read requests lately but looking forward to reading your new stories >
11 Years Ago
I'm a little busy right now because I just started my spring semester at school, but hopefully I'll .. read moreI'm a little busy right now because I just started my spring semester at school, but hopefully I'll have some more writing up soon!
This was realy good. I love the similies that are used.
I know that this is about a specific place, but I felt like I was home while reading it.
It's people like you that make me want to continue writing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
That's about the sweetest thing anyone'es ever said to me. Thank you so much and home is where the h.. read moreThat's about the sweetest thing anyone'es ever said to me. Thank you so much and home is where the heart belongs :)
Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..