Bonfires

(turn your volume down to a mellow low) About time I put out something romantic.For those who've found happily ever after, this ones for you :)

Bonfires

 

 

 Days are drifting astray

Light it ablaze, close beside you

Is where I want to stay

On the white sands by the Caspian shores

Looking at the night blend in with the waves

Fragments of shells under our feet

Fearless we lay counting the stars

Bonfires take us away

 

To jazzy skies of grey

Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes

Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours

Love like embers implanted in your cheeks

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze

Romantic music sets the mood to please     

Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Chase after you through the seven seas

Bonfires take us away

 

To a mystical place where the moon and the sun       

Kiss and exchange glances, summer and winter romances

The life within a glimpse of an eye is an eternal lullaby

Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep

Your presence and essence with absence of doubt

Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out  

Bonfires take us away...

...Towards an endless love

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Muse]

I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

[KeeD]

Haha wow you make me so proud of writing :D Like i'll be honest with you muse, I sit down and go to write something and I honestly don't believe in it until I read the reviews on here and I start to question myself... is it really as good as these amazing people say, I mean wow you make me feel proud to write, thank you!!! I loved that line too "Put me to slee, some dreams I forever want to keep" I hope the poem plants an image or reminds people of their fondest memories of being in love :)

[KeeD]

Oh by the way Muse is the font and music distracting?

[Muse]

hell no...the music is superp..you know my taste...I think. If there was singing...I think it can take away from the poet's words. But it's soft...moody..who is this guy he's fabulous!

[KeeD]

Luis oneto, you can find his music on soundcloud.com, Thank you for being so supportive < 3

[Muse]

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
read moreonly tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;

because we will love until the end?

or becaues we love until the end....sorry...grammar is not my thing...can't help but think it's missing a word.

[KeeD]

let me know if this works :3

[Muse]

Yes!!

[MandaBear]

this is an amazing write. There is something magical and romantic. great 100%

[KeeD]

Thank you :D indeed there is, a bonfire can spark up your love life :)

[CS]

Sometimes I leave long winded reviews. This is not one of those times. Just one word...

Perfect

[KeeD]

Wow, thank you :)

[Lover Of Words]

What a great peice!

[KeeD]

Thank you < 3

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome :)

[LA Lorena]

A most romantic poem Keegan. Intense heat, raw power, being mesmerized by flames, is it any wonder that fire captures us and leads us to thoughts and imaginings of passion and love? I can hear the crackle and sparks flying here!

[KeeD]

Fire is the ignition to an eternal flame of love, I don't think people truly understand that the inner flame can never be put out if it's given enough oxygen and love by it's flame-keeper. That was really cute when you said you could hear the crackle and sparks flying there :D Thank you < 3

[Be myself!]

Beautiful! I love it!

[KeeD]

Like yourself, thank you :D!

[Be myself!]

Thanks. lol. And your welcome. :)

[rnuff]

I love bonfires, this is an amazing write. enjoyed the music as well

[KeeD]

Thank you Kim, so much!

[Monster ^.^]

Woooow. The words are written with fluidity. and the music! Oh! I love how it made it more fantastic a read :) What a great job :)

[KeeD]

I love that you appreciated the music as well, sometimes it tends to distract readers I hope this wasn't the case, thank you so much!!!

[ms. barrie]

eloquently written, imagery woven through this with your brilliant choice of words of the sweetness of romance and fulfillment of love is exquisite. not to mention, great rhyme and fluidity. wonderful job, Keegan :)

[KeeD]

Thank you Miss Joy :) Hope you liked the music as well < 3

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Kee. Oh very much so, i think it can be quite inspiring for an upcoming next chapter for story. -- pen on -

[ms. barrie]

hearts to you as well, sorry, WC likes eating my hearts ha! ;)

[s y e]

Woah. This. Was. Breathtaking.
Is was magical and beautifully written, Kee. Aren't you quite the romantic ;-P
Very nicely down. Lovely flow. Very lucky girl she is :-)
Going in my favourites

100/100

[KeeD]

You're breathtaking :) Thank you

[s y e]

Anytime darling! ;-) The pleasure was all mine! You're amazing!

[Frieda P]

This is a mystical place, if only. My heart leaped and skipped a beat when I read it. Quite the romantic you are Kee. I love this...

jazzy skies of grey...just my cup of tea you know!

Lucky woman you wrote this for is all I can say, color me green. I love this to pieces! 100/100

[KeeD]

It isn't just directed at one woman :D It's for all the lovers out there who need to be refreshed about good memories of true love.

[Frieda P]

Every woman hopes to get a love letter such as this as least once in her life, when you find your true love be sure to wrte one as lovely, as this belongs to us now.