Bonfires

(turn your volume down to a mellow low) About time I put out something romantic.For those who've found happily ever after, this ones for you :)

Bonfires

 

 

 Days are drifting astray

Light it ablaze, close beside you

Is where I want to stay

On the white sands by the Caspian shores

Looking at the night blend in with the waves

Fragments of shells under our feet

Fearless we lay counting the stars

Bonfires take us away

 

To jazzy skies of grey

Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes

Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours

Love like embers implanted in your cheeks

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze

Romantic music sets the mood to please     

Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Chase after you through the seven seas

Bonfires take us away

 

To a mystical place where the moon and the sun       

Kiss and exchange glances, summer and winter romances

The life within a glimpse of an eye is an eternal lullaby

Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep

Your presence and essence with absence of doubt

Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out  

Bonfires take us away...

...Towards an endless love

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Muse]

I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

[KeeD]

Haha wow you make me so proud of writing :D Like i'll be honest with you muse, I sit down and go to write something and I honestly don't believe in it until I read the reviews on here and I start to question myself... is it really as good as these amazing people say, I mean wow you make me feel proud to write, thank you!!! I loved that line too "Put me to slee, some dreams I forever want to keep" I hope the poem plants an image or reminds people of their fondest memories of being in love :)

[KeeD]

Oh by the way Muse is the font and music distracting?

[Muse]

hell no...the music is superp..you know my taste...I think. If there was singing...I think it can take away from the poet's words. But it's soft...moody..who is this guy he's fabulous!

[KeeD]

Luis oneto, you can find his music on soundcloud.com, Thank you for being so supportive < 3

[Muse]

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
read moreonly tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;

because we will love until the end?

or becaues we love until the end....sorry...grammar is not my thing...can't help but think it's missing a word.

[KeeD]

let me know if this works :3

[Muse]

Yes!!

[pia]

This creates feelings within me i cant even explain
You are so talented with the way u write !!! And express yourself!!! Its impressive. The words and emotions and everything
Perfection!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Again I enjoyed the poetry. The words danced with perfect tone and balance. Making the reader feel the need and the want. Would be nice to have a rewined button. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Davidgeo]

It reads well, good flow. Kinda cheesy and standard content but very well constructed.

Also, and its not just me most of the people I talk to about this find it annoying... and that is auto playing music while we read. It doesn't help, there is a reason almost nobody does it. It's an unnecessary gimmick in my opinion.

[Papaya]

This is ultra romantic, love it
it stirs a familiar feeling i long to experience again someday. the music is nice choice too. the warmth stirs...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

How beautiful, by beautiful I meanyour poem and its meaning, also the music, and also the way you have dedicated it to people in love. That was a very sweet thing for you to do.
I enjoyed this write, the music in the background is a great touch.
I loved almost the whole thing, I just dislike how some of the poem, rhymes and some does not. I say rhyme the whole thing, or don't rhyme at all. This is just my opinion as I think the half rhyming thing isn't good. Loads of people do it though, and some people think its good.
I really enjoyed this poem overall, it was so sweet and romantic.
Great write keep on writing :)

[Ruth]

Absolutely gorgeous! Such visuals...there is a soft tone to this and melted me :) So very, very beautiful, much enjoyed hon :)

[chandlerl]

Omg...that was beautiful. Reading THAT poem with THIS song...it flowed beautifully and it makes me wonder what I missed while reading your other poems without also listening to the song you put in. The music really set the tone, and enhanced the poems beauty.
Thank you.

[Maskedthoughts]

I love your theme and the way it all flows. It's so much more than words it makes me feel and makes me remember stuff from my own life. I really love the whole aspect of the poem, how romantic it was and the way you incorporated the bonfire and the oceans. Absolutely love it, never stop writing!