Line of control

A poem regarding the brutality of the Pakistani Army on the Line of Control

This imaginary line

Defines you from I

You stay on your side

Cross it and die

We draw such lines

to claim land

power and greed

go hand in hand

Cease fire

Lets talk peace

Brutal slaughter

Two soldiers deceased

Deny it you will

Blame the birds or the sky

S**t hits the ceiling 

You pretend or you lie

Mutilated were their bodies

Devastated is our country

We mourn our martyrs 

As you claim your trophies 

Enough is enough

You want to fight rough?

We won't retaliate like animals 

But we'll make you suffer name and shame

We'll make sure you're the black dot

In the map of history

We'll show the world

How barbaric you are

Dig your own graves

You cowards

For the line of control 

Maybe just an imaginary line

But in the mind of us Indians 

All your crimes

Will not go unpunished

For God and Country 

We will press, as

You continue to deny

Justice will unravel

Your disgusting lie 

Jai Hind

Author's Note

Salute to all the Indian Soldiers who lost their lives on the line of control and strength to all the families of these brave-hearts.

Reviews

[Purva Pathak]

:)

[Purva Pathak]

toooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooood dea... :*
as an Indian i salute yoo fr this piece...
Full......no no not Full....overflowing with emotions

[Overrated-World]

Such a great write!

[Lover Of Words]

Very good!

[Krithika Raghavan]

As a fellow Indian, I admire this poem and I love this song...
salute to all the Indian soldiers, I admire your talent.
Bharat maata ki jai.

[Euro]

Wow...what a strong poem!
I gotta tell you that this has left me surprised because of how well it's written :)
Keep it up,
-Penelope H.

[creativequill]

this was strong, full of raw emotion, I think it's a very well written piece.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

powerful write Keegan ... wow

[chandlerl]

Dig your own graves
You cowards
such powerful words...

[Rajkamal]

Sorry dude, but patriotism is just not my cup of tea. Its too shallow and I like my cups deeper, so that it holds more and more tea.

[KeeD]

To each is own brother, thank you for the review