I dont understsnd how to write haiku .. but I enjoy it when others do it... o btw .... I am a cusp a virgo and a leo ☆
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.. easy, just have fun with it, anything concerning nature is a.. read more5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.. easy, just have fun with it, anything concerning nature is a haiku, everything else would be a senyru and :D wow that's awesome.. I've only know a couple of cusps through my years.. but they've always had very unique cool personalities.
I noticed this poem and thought I should read it. From the title, it looked very interesting and I wanted to check it out too. I did obviously and I love it. Horoscopes are awesome and each holds a different, but unique meaning behind it. I've read previous reviews and most are either Cancer or Libra. I don't know if I'm the first to mention that mine is the one and only special Aquarius. My birthday is February 15th, which is coming up quite soon. I am so very happy to be finally turning 16 and legally drive by myself. I have grown up so much! Life is too short, and that's a proven fact too! Back to your poem, I'm guessing that this is a haiku. I only say that from reading the other reviews! :P I don't think I would accomplish writing a haiku, but hey with me being a writer I'm supposed to be willing to try to write from different genres and types of poetry too! You have done a lovely job, Keegan! Well done :D
Side note: Keep writing and posting your beautiful work!
Ashley Rivers-Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Few more days for your birthday :D Sweet 16 :) thank you Ashley, have an amazing up coming Birthday.. read moreFew more days for your birthday :D Sweet 16 :) thank you Ashley, have an amazing up coming Birthday :)
11 Years Ago
Yeah whoop whoop! ;) I can't wait for it either. You're welcome, Keegan. Thank you very much! :'D
I'm Cancer...just wanted to join on the bandwagon and tell you my sign :-D June 30th, if you're even more curious...1970 if you wanna be rude and ask a lady her age...well I never! ;-) This Senryu is really quite stunning. My sister is Sagittarius, but she is December's legend ;-) I love this. I wonder why I didn't see it when you posted it...hmmm...someone's getting lazy with the RRs, yeah? :-D Thanks so much for sharing this with us, Kee.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I don't like to usually send out multiple read requests :D I know people are busy :D But oh wow I co.. read moreI don't like to usually send out multiple read requests :D I know people are busy :D But oh wow I could pretty much tell you were under the zodiac sign of cancer with your pincers of truth and all :D You're a young lively heart and i'm happy to have you as a friend on here. :) Thank you for reviewing. And your sister rocks, sagi's unite! Lmao
11 Years Ago
*laugh* I'm going to pass that message on to my sister! The pincers of truth...I like that. I thin.. read more*laugh* I'm going to pass that message on to my sister! The pincers of truth...I like that. I think that'll be the name of my autobiography XD And send as many RRs as you like to me; I read everything I get. When I've had enough, I turn the RRs off. I'm happy we're friends as well. Thanks, Kee.
I'm a Libra. Everyone else gets cool animals like a crab, fish, lion and bull. What do I get? I get a pair of scales. What is up with that?!?! :'(
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
my mom and aunt are both libras :D their always judging me :P both of them are born on the same day .. read moremy mom and aunt are both libras :D their always judging me :P both of them are born on the same day even but 4 years apart :D.. Hey the fish got scales too :P just saying.. :D life's a box of chocolates.. and I don't care what kind of chocolate i am.. I'll take them all :D
11 Years Ago
Ahha, too true, the fish did get scales :') I like your stance though. Take life as it is and grasp .. read moreAhha, too true, the fish did get scales :') I like your stance though. Take life as it is and grasp every opportunity! :)
It's a Japanese form of poetry called a haiku. It basically states that my zodiac sign is Sagittariu.. read moreIt's a Japanese form of poetry called a haiku. It basically states that my zodiac sign is Sagittarius, which falls under November and I conquer aspects of my life because my qualities are such that I will pick myself up from the ground and fight through them. At the same time the poem has to fit the syllable count of first line 5, second 7, third 5. (5,7,5) so thats basically what a haiku is :)
I'm a fish, Pisces. Could explain why I always feels like I am swimming upstream
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
What a beautiful fish you are too :) I don't know a lot of Pisces but they seem very refined and ele.. read moreWhat a beautiful fish you are too :) I don't know a lot of Pisces but they seem very refined and elegant both in conversation and display.
Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..