Flight 5150

Collaboration by CREEPER and Keegan D'souza http://www.writerscafe.org/Im-buried-alive

FLIGHT 5150

I am aviator

 A hater of mankind

I control this monstrosity

My craft roars

Straight into an atrocity

My physique trained

To control this plane

But my mind is negligent

To the devil beside me

 

Black box

Collect my sound

Before we hit our burial ground

Let them know how this all went down

Bipolar co-pilot

You seek to destroy us?

 Holding a gun to my head

Your mission you have said

332 passengers soon to be dead....just up ahead

Turbulence again, as sinners begin

To say their prayers, nothing left but despair

Why today, Haven't I cried enough

Divorce papers served by the wife

Daughter with leukemia, fighting for her life

I've worked hard to reach here

In the air I feel alive

 I might be a broken man down there

But up here I feel revived

Nose in decent

Our fate is sealed

This is your captain speaking

Flight 5150

Is on it's final descension

Pray for your resurrection

 

As I look into the windshield

Seeing the gun in my hand

Pointed at my head

I know I will soon be surrounded by the dead

 

I realize, it was I

Who crashed this plane

It was I

Who went insane

Limbs severed from the hip

Receiver still in hand with a tight grip

Houston

We've hit the ground

In Hades my soul has shut down...inactive

Author's Note

Collaboration between CREEPER and Keegan D'souza.
Schizophrenic pilot having an episode on the job causing one of the worst crashes in history. Enjoy :)

Reviews

[Colt 45 & 9/16]

Wow frikkin WOW!

[KeeD]

Cheers, haha glad you liked it

[kublakhan27]

I always wondered why they won't let people like me operate heavy machinery...the bipolar is alright but the hating of mankind might be an issue haha I'm kidding...for the most part :P A great piece though, very intense, and it has a flow that isn't always so seamless in collaborations...nice work :)

(P.S. I will post the same comment on Creeper's page)

[KeeD]

Please do, he is a genius mind and we had a lot of fun making this. Thank you for the review :)

[Nicole]

Really like the music that it's set to :)
I also like how you've written this, cannot pick just one part that I like best, it all flows together so nicely *smiles*

[KeeD]

Yea we had a lot of fun writing this together. Glad you liked it, really appreciate the review. xoxo Kee

[Lilith]

This really has blown my mind I like it but unfortunately sometimes I'm not so get at understanding poems and I would hate to interpret it wrong i do like it and the word usage good job

[KeeD]

Thank you :)

[s y e]

Great collaboration guys. Very deep.
Creepy music, gave me goosebumps! :/ Well done!

[KeeD]

Glad you liked it, we did our job I guess if it gave you chills up your spine :)

[s y e]

Yes you did. Gave me the heebie jeebies

[Tasha]

Wow, intense collaboration boys. I enjoyed it and I liked the music.

[KeeD]

thank you :D

[Tasha]

you're welcome :D