Flight 5150

Collaboration by CREEPER and Keegan D'souza http://www.writerscafe.org/Im-buried-alive

FLIGHT 5150

I am aviator

 A hater of mankind

I control this monstrosity

My craft roars

Straight into an atrocity

My physique trained

To control this plane

But my mind is negligent

To the devil beside me

 

Black box

Collect my sound

Before we hit our burial ground

Let them know how this all went down

Bipolar co-pilot

You seek to destroy us?

 Holding a gun to my head

Your mission you have said

332 passengers soon to be dead....just up ahead

Turbulence again, as sinners begin

To say their prayers, nothing left but despair

Why today, Haven't I cried enough

Divorce papers served by the wife

Daughter with leukemia, fighting for her life

I've worked hard to reach here

In the air I feel alive

 I might be a broken man down there

But up here I feel revived

Nose in decent

Our fate is sealed

This is your captain speaking

Flight 5150

Is on it's final descension

Pray for your resurrection

 

As I look into the windshield

Seeing the gun in my hand

Pointed at my head

I know I will soon be surrounded by the dead

 

I realize, it was I

Who crashed this plane

It was I

Who went insane

Limbs severed from the hip

Receiver still in hand with a tight grip

Houston

We've hit the ground

In Hades my soul has shut down...inactive

Author's Note

Collaboration between CREEPER and Keegan D'souza.
Schizophrenic pilot having an episode on the job causing one of the worst crashes in history. Enjoy :)

Reviews

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

This was an interesting read and I love the plot. It's hard to picture someone like this, but I was able to picture this scene in my head. My best friend is bi-polar, so I understand how scary certain episodes can be when being had. Schizo's are always to have been on a different level than most around them, they have the unique thoughts and different levels of episodes as opposed to bi-polar people. We've learned about some episodes in Psychology and it was really interesting...scary to think about this, but it could be possible.

[KeeD]

Thank you, i'm sure Creeper will appreciate this review as much as I did.
If it installed fear in the readers head, make them think twice about boarding a plane or make them want to read people better before putting their lives in their hands then yeah we did our job :D

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

Then you surely did your job well :)

[Tex]

I remember when this happened, very good write. well done friends.

[KeeD]

Did it actually happen O_O, lol we made this stuff up to be honest. Thanks for the review Nic

[Tex]

well my friend then art has imitated real life because this event happened almost to the letter as you have described it.

[Tex]

i believe it was a co-pilot that grabbed the yoke and nosed it down and the pilot fought with him all the way down... it was all on the black box and made the news many years ago...

[Tex]

it was a commercial airliner with lots of passengers

[KeeD]

Woah that is brutal wow i'd love to read that story somewhere or like just know how it when down seems fascinatingly frightful. I wanted our readers to think its the co-pilot doing all this, wanting to crash the plane but then add the twist that it was actually the pilot with a bipolar personality who orchestrated the entire event. Kind of like the movie Fight Club, Brad Pitt, Edward Norton.. A Fight Club in the air :)

[Tex]

cool

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow mind blowing I love this. So cleaver and dark yet so true of the despair and destruction of the human spirit.

[KeeD]

:D Exactly what we were trying to portray, Hope it gave you chills, xoxo. Kee

[Carolann Dowsett]

It did I love it :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Wow this was intense!! Such a cool idea, though this didn't help with my fear of planes:P

[KeeD]

Haha life's to short, to unexpected to sit and fear stuff hun, just live! :D thanks for the review

[Shawna]

Very intense poem, and wonderfully done! Brilliant x2!

[KeeD]

Thank you!

[Aly]

Awesome job

[KeeD]

Thank you!

[disheveledApathy]

See, this is why I hate planes. ;) Fantastic poem, I liked how you made it rhyme.

[KeeD]

Thank you! The Dark Realm Group promises to put more amazing collabs out there for you all. Thank you for the kind words again, much love and respect - Kee.

[Muse]

What a fantastic collaboration. The flying machine made mortal. Until now...I didn't believe that was possible.

[KeeD]

Haha wow thanks for the wonderful review, the Dark Realm Group promises to put more good collabs out there :)

[That_Girl]

"Divorced papers" *Divorce

This was pretty damn incredible. Creative... you both did a fantastic job!

[KeeD]

Cheers, Dark Realm Group shall bring you guys many more collaborations soon!

[Rob Santana]

Hey pretty good Kee,haha

[KeeD]

haha "high five" brother!

[kublakhan27]

Great work guys :)