Equinox

Celestial Path

Day and night tantamount for

I am equinox

Author's Note

Not sure if I got it right, if this is a Haiku or not :P

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

yes love this Haiku
beautiful
i just need to look one word up in the dictionary
ignorance is me lol
thanks for entering this into my 5 lines and under comp good luck

[KeeD]

Thank you so much!

[Devanshu Rajput]

a perfect Haiku....

[icelandicblue]

Powerful haiku- I love it.

[Sarah Redigan]

Intresting

[KatDarkness]

Best haiku I've ever read! "Celestial path" just the amount of imagery in that one line was incredible! :)

[KeeD]

Wow!!! That made my day. Thank you so much, have a wonderful 2013!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

agree with Delaney

[@]

I've seen far worse, (and receiving far more praise)
Keep going.!

[KeeD]

Thank you ^_^

[Kajal Gulabani]

Hi ! M not into Haiku but this piece defo seems to be good.. :)

[LA Lorena]

a valiant first attempt grasshopper!

[LA Lorena]

5 bucks and her number is yours! ;)

[KeeD]

5 bucks, lady I was willing to go up to 500! Sold haha. Thank you so much for the review, i'll return the kindness and review your work soon, xoxo.

[kublakhan27]

I'd say you've offered up an excellent example of the form :)