Fascinate

Level heads make glowing hearts off-beat

We sit on clouds of regret
Ventricles spent from busted forget
As we move on
Time carries our demons
When your door opens take what's presented
But remember lifes greatest gift isn't revenge
Its freedom
You have to breakdown before you feel
Arms wide open, painfully grasping, gasping for the real
Love is broken
We are all spolks that support lifes ever lasting wheel

That spins

Spinning

...forever

Author's Note

Ignore grammr and punctuation

Reviews

[Annie S]

'When your door opens take what's presented' it smashed every line there. You're correct when there's an opportunity take it. With that line together with the title goes well with the other pieces.It's a charm/temptation.
Beautiful poem i like it :)

[KeatonLouis]

Words written, best describes thought

[Annie S]

very true ;)