A Fixated Love

A Fixated Love

A Poem by KeatonLouis
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Musics a feeling, let your mind breath with bliss

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Have you ever wondered how life would be if we didn't speak
But we could project our words through the mystique sound of a broken beat,
There were no lips, just slow wisps of your speakers hit brushing the lobe before
the release took ownership of your endorphins
But this time its more than, a recording or a burst of love reporting
it's a sure thing
We can't understand but we ignore the bullshit because we start seeing more of a peaceful force, taking the low by storm and reforming the unknown.

Between fascination and twisted fate we escape through musics gate
We relate through human traits, cupids hate and the groove in a fluid state
Let it take over the weight your shoulders take, lift the world before it's to late
I always listen, mind open and ears ajar

© 2013 KeatonLouis


Author's Note

KeatonLouis
Ignore grammar, haven't finished it but please do comment

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Music is my drug of choice. I totally get this. Its a great escape and it's one that's actually good for us. Great write man.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thanks for putting this up and getting online! I love this so much. So much power and emotion in this piece, it is beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your description in this poem is very strong and i like the idea that
you use it to create an even stronger emotion. I loved it
Keep writing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeatonLouis

11 Years Ago

Thank you so so much for your input. I am very new to this. :). Please keep it coming.
Annie S

11 Years Ago

No problem And you're welcome :)

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KeatonLouis
KeatonLouis

Eau Claire, WI



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I never thought I'd ever try writing but lately being able to write and listen to music has been my escape. I'm 26 and from the midwest. I love positive vibes and contagious laughter. more..

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A Poem by KeatonLouis