Words of the wise

This is for all of the lost young men in this world

Deception is what you preach,

Yet faith is what you lack,

And you sit and wonder why no one has your back.

So let me shine a light and get your mind right,

You speak words of heartbreak but if you checked your minds sight you would see that you have too live right,

or every battle brought too you is lost without a fight.

So as you seek sorrow for the for the feelings you borrow, understand that there is no stronger power than love except faith. and without that you are lost without a trace.
#~Words too Naive young men~

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[justjenn_2u]

Powerful words in a short piece. This is excellent and packs the punch. Write on, friend.