Life is fragile. We are just a seed in the overall picture of time. We don't know how long we have here. It is up to us to make a mark. Some people take up the challenge, others let it slip by. To some it is important, to others not. Get your pen working Kay. A meaningful write.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you for the powerful perspective, Chris.
Hope you've been doing well.
3 Years Ago
All reasonable my friend and I hope your world is being kind to you :)
I agree my friend.
"The time to plant a seed is now.
Or we would live a life without a path.
I'll Ink down so many as much as I can
Before it is too late to say goodbye."
The above lines are necessary for us to know proper life. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
Beautiful
I love this
Life is a flash it really is
I look back on growing up my parents both gone for years now and others I wonder if it was all but a dream 😴
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
That's how life is. Like illusion, it disappeared as if it was not there in the first place.
.. read moreThat's how life is. Like illusion, it disappeared as if it was not there in the first place.
Thank you so much for this lovely contribution, Julie.
Wise words that should be lived every day. For life in its brevity grants us so little time to leave behind memories for those who love us. So that we may live a bit longer after our passing in the heart that we touch. Thank you for sharing your thoughtful poem with us.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Thank you for your wonderful contribution, Carlos.
We only have this short time.
In truth, the now is all we ever really have. The past is a dream, the future a guess. If we don't value and utilize the now, we are ignoring the only reality there is. The poem illustrates this truth well.
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3 Years Ago
Thank you for your wonderful review, John.
And that's true. Now is the only reality we have a.. read moreThank you for your wonderful review, John.
And that's true. Now is the only reality we have at the moment.
Life is too short; it seems to pass us by too quickly; So, in a blink of an eye, get busy, have a path, do as many things as you like that give you pleasure. Write, think, philosophize, meditate, love another, be an activist for justice; but don't stand still. I like your comparison to life as a dream; gone in a split second or not even remembered. Well written and a very relevant.
Warm Regards,
Betty
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
That's it Betty.
Utilizing the present rightly is the biggest chance we ever have.
Th.. read moreThat's it Betty.
Utilizing the present rightly is the biggest chance we ever have.
Thank for your wonderful response.
Despite my knowing your message is spot-on, I also wonder how many humans, given the curse of "free will" can actually do as you suggest? I mean, everyone gives a little bit, thinking they're giving more than they are, but most people are not willing to live a life of any great sacrifice, just to be remembered as a good person. For you, personally, (in your poem) this sounds like it's a decision made, tho (((HUGS)))
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3 Years Ago
Thanks for your insight, Margie.
It's been so long.
Life is fragile. We are just a seed in the overall picture of time. We don't know how long we have here. It is up to us to make a mark. Some people take up the challenge, others let it slip by. To some it is important, to others not. Get your pen working Kay. A meaningful write.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you for the powerful perspective, Chris.
Hope you've been doing well.
3 Years Ago
All reasonable my friend and I hope your world is being kind to you :)
Just trying to reveal to the world about my point of view about life. What I think life is and How I think we can overcome. Through my experience and challenges in life, I've been able to figure ou.. more..