I agree my friend.
"Kindness
brightens a sad face
it could save millions
from ending their own lives. "
The above lines, we must do. We need to lead with concern, kindness and listen. Would be a better world. Thank you Kay for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
I am adventurous,and I think the technique adds some meaning to the main idea.
There is a natural divide when we are judgmental.
Segregation isn’t fun and is never a perfect picture.
I wish people ask themselves what color of air they breath in every time they let tribe,race,sex,religion color cloud their judgement.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
That was a powerful perspective, Sarah.
I really wish people would.
I agree with sentiments in this one, but tribalism is as old as humanity. Love alone can contain it, but love must have desire behind it.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
I just wish people would understand that the world can be a safer and beautiful place to live. .. read moreI just wish people would understand that the world can be a safer and beautiful place to live.
Thank you for your insight, John.
If we could embrace the golden rule to love our neighbor as ourself how much better life would be. I don't know when people will see past skin and see the true beauty of each soul.
Excellent poem Kay
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Exactly!
The world is too blind to see the beauty in diversity.
Thank you for your rem.. read moreExactly!
The world is too blind to see the beauty in diversity.
Thank you for your remarkable review Cherrie.
While there are one or two spelling mistakes, your poem is remarkably beautiful. You and your poem have the power to change society on a small level, as do I, and anyone. Maybe if enough people think like you do, change will be possible. I'm glad to know that there are people like you, who are kind. I particularly like the structure of your poem to support your statement, the shape of a water faucet. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Thanks you for your remarkable review, RJ.
If everyone is kind, life would have been better o.. read moreThanks you for your remarkable review, RJ.
If everyone is kind, life would have been better off.
Just trying to reveal to the world about my point of view about life. What I think life is and How I think we can overcome. Through my experience and challenges in life, I've been able to figure ou.. more..