Our Love Story

Our Love Story

Right under the moonlight sky

when the night was damp in love.

There you make a wish on stars

that we could for life be one.

Your wishes poisoned by time

and soon buried your blissful thought

pushing our love far apart

keeping me far from your world.

Debris of the shattered memories

still clearly reflect the past pictures.

Though you forgot  to remember,

yet I couldn't remember to forget.

Author's Note

I rarely write about love.
I don't know if this really worth writing.

What do you think?

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great last two lines...the past pictures forgotten on her side, remembered on the speaker's.
and really cool line "when the night was damp in love"
really well done poem...
the metaphors really work, and the imagery is "shattering."

j.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you very much, John.
I've been trying to improve my abilities.