Salvation.

When I thought all was over,
When I thought the beginning was the end.
When life turned upside down,
And the sun was far from the earth,
When darkness grip my heart,
Encumbering my mind with fear.
Down on my knees I cried,
Praying for heaven to come and help.

When the sky was coming down on me,
When the earth was sinking below my feet,
When the Stars are twinkling darkness,
And the moon turned its back at me..
When my hope was quietly dying,
And rainbows of death overshadowed me,
I called on to my father in heaven,
Who came in haste to rescue me.

Author's Note

Just feel like sharing this.

Thanks for your review.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this so much, this is just what i needed to hear today!!! thankyou for this!

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

I'm glad you found satisfaction in this.
Thank you for loving it, Julie.

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of a miracle to it. Also has the sound of a real experience. Though no specific details are given, evidently the speaker was going through an ordeal. The poem makes good use of imagery in describing the feelings of abandonment experienced. Apparently it was the darkness before the dawn, because prayers were answered and a deliverance occurred. It demonstrates well the power of faith.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, John.
I believe by faith, things can be turned around and it's really working for me.

[Ghost writer]

I like this, it has a huge sense of hope, like we can be in the worst place we'll ever be in and if we just ask we'll be saved, it's lovely and true.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you for your thoughtful review.
I really appreciate it.

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

this is a really good write

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, Kescha.

[wordman]

seems we all feel that pain,that feeling of despair.
but that`s what helps you to pray a real prayer of hope

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you, Wordman.
Pain teach men how to pray.
I learned.

[wordman]

you are right,and you`re welcome

[Onlyme]

Such an amazing, uplifting, beautiful, lovely, faith-filled, and optimistic in having god in your life.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, Dawn.
Faith help a lot.

[Fay Slimm]

The write is an amazing witness to the power of heavenly assistance and thank you for sharing it Kay.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Yes.
Thank you for your review too, Fay.

[Relic]

You are a lucky person to feel this way. Many have no belief system and therefore no one to turn to. I'm sure God listens and knows before we do what we need.

A good honest poem. Nice job.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you, Relic.
I'm glad you stopped by to give this kind of review.
You words make me feel more saved.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

faith can move mountains...so they say...and whether that is true or not...you write with such a positive outlook here...that in our darkest hour...light can come if we have the faith it will.
this had me humming Elton John's song "Salvation"---fitting.
j.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, J.
I really appreciate your wonderful review.

[Neville]

This is a terrific testimony to your own faith my friend... not only well crafted but with an uplifting message for all those who hold similar values and beliefs..... N :)

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, Neville.
That's what has been helping me.

[Neville]

clearly so.... and good to see N