Internal Reflection.

Rain rains raindrops,
Sunshine shines sun,
River rivers riverfront.
Silver centers silver's point.

Winter winters winterfall.
Slowly snowing swingers fun.
Writing widening writer's world,
Solely spoken swifter words.


Twitterer tinder tweeting task,
Tricking tenders tricky traps,
Thinking truly triggers acts,
Turning thoughts to things alive.

Author's Note

Just playing around with words.
What do you think?

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

The last line says it all, Kay. Perfect capstone to a clever and original poem. Great message!

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, Ray.
I really appreciate.

[barleygirl]

I'm not a huge fan of repetition, so I started out with a bad impression from reading V1, becuz of the repetitive word crafting. But your poem quickly revived itself in my opinion, with V2 & V3, which are well crafted fun wordplay exercises with thought-provoking ideas. Some people do not appreciate the nonsensical nature of wordplay, but I love it. It can mean anything you want it to mean! This poem feels like you started out a bit sluggish, then your mojo picked up more & more, until the last verse, which is very much zinging! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, Margie.
I'm glad you like this one.

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

Awesome! would make an interesting tongue twister challenge 😉😁

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you, Kescha.
I glad I'm getting addicted.
"When Love Meets With Peace" was my first. Now this one. I don't know what will be the next.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Would make a cute picture book for kids.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Oh! Thank you so much, Cherries.
I'll work on that.

[kitty]

Glad you put this on site as a teaser for us. Thank you. Does us good to be put to the test so to speak - shaking up the old grey matter! well done!

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you, Kitty.
I'm also glad you were here to give this wonderful review.

[kitty]

My pleasure.

[Robert Trakofler]

ah oh be careful Kay it can be addicting.... just sayin:) eventually you will start doing it in your sleep and speaking it to people without noticing

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Oh! Thank you, Robert.
I just enjoy the fun of it.
It makes me feel good.

[Chris Shaw]

You've certainly got a handle on alliteration Kay. Plenty of it here. Sounds good read out loud. Have to be careful with tongue twisters though :)

Chris

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Many thanks to you, Chris.
I just feel like playing with words sometimes.

[Chris Shaw]

It's fun Kay isn't it? That's what writers do.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you, Chris.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love the aliteration you have employed in this quick paced little number Kay.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, John.
I really appreciate your review.