A BROKEN HEART.

when someone you love leave you dangling in pain.

she came my way on a sunny day.
when I was boringly walking my lonely way.
She halted my step and heal my pain,
making me to feel hopeful again.

Her words are cool and charming type.
It cure my wounded and broken heart.
Her smile was just like healing balm,
that brought my happiness back to life.

She smiles, I smile. She walks, I walk.
She brought my feelings from loneliness to joy.
She dances, I dance, we sang the same song.
She kicked my worries out of my thoughts.

I thought that this would last forever,
but just so short it ended with time.
She said she's sorry to come around,
And not her pleasure to say goodbye.

Tears ran down my cheeks as she walked away,
Leaving me dangling in hellish pain.
My heart is broken just once again.
Even worse than before she came.

How I wish she stay forever.
Or not have ever come around.
Now that she has torn my heart apart,
Can I ever love again?

Author's Note

Just trying to write something new.
what do see this to be?

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

This is a moving poem. Through the pain I can feel the true attachment of love that formerly existed.

Love started so well!

'She came my way on a sunny day'.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you very much.