My Invisible twin brother.

This is a poem that talk about life and personality. Our actions towards life would determine the action of life towards us.

Looking at the invincible mirror in front of me,
I saw a man of my own identity.
He smiles as I smiled and wink as i winked
The teeth of his mouth was never differ from that of me.

I folded my hands, he also got his own fold.
I intended to go, so it did on its own,
I was so confused of the second me,
That is standing so perfectly in front of me.

I shockingly look behind the mirror,
To know if i could see the little pal,
But I found it to be no one,
Right behind the the middle man.

I came back to watch again,
He emerge to do the same,
I got to frown my face,
So did he without delay.
He never miss a second,
To act in all my way.

I turned my back to him,
He turns his back to me.
The way I did to him,
It's the way it did to me.

I later know the invisible Kid,
To be my dearly copied part.
It shows the true me,
and explain how I am.

I'm not too good, i'm not too bad.
All I got to know is that,
I am always the real me.

Author's Note

Please comment as you read. I really want to know my level of writing.

Reviews

[The Realist]

whoa this poem gives off an illusion type of thing... i cant really explain the feeling. it was a great one none the less , havent had a poem do that to me before. i loved this! truly amazing.... keep up the great work Salisu Titilola :)

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

That was really encouraging. Thanks a lot.

[The Realist]

and you are very much welcome 1:)

[Adesanya Yewande]

wow,with the topic i thought it was a real twin brother until i read the content that it was a mirror twin brother....good write up

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

thanks for that sister?