MY HEART (LET ME BE)

Let me be!
Oh, independent heart of mine
Why won't you let me be?
Why do you keep controlling me?

My mind seems powerless
When you show your prowess
I wish I could protest,
But you take total control of me
The more I claim to control you
The more you overpower me

You force tears out of my eyes
You erupt a feeling which never dies
I cant stop trying,
The more I try the more it seems I'm dying

Your determination marvels me
The more the NOs come
The more you go
At your distress
I am more or less useless

You, do I detest
But who you love I love
Oh, independent heart of mine
Let me be!

Reviews

[Leo]

Sounds like a dominating heart..I liked it alot and I was able to relate to your wonderful words, rhyme and rhythm..nevertheless there's a saying that a healthy heart that still feels translates to healthy brain and body..some people lost the juice in their hearts my man..their hearts turned into a stone so I feel you are good ;)

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[Tiffany K Charles]

wonderful write young sir.... i loved it.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

I can relate this to my own life. The mind thinks prudentially, but the heart thinks morally. You try not to obey your heart- you try to act sensibly- but your heart overpowers and you act emotionally. Nicely penned. Keep writing.

[KayodeJSK]

Thanks a lot.