Dreamtown

Generically titled. But, you get my drift.

Welcome to Dreamtown

The lights are always bright

and shining, illuminating

the life. The people, 

they are free,

like the birds 

that fly over the sea.

Their thoughts

-Unpredictable, 

Freely spoken

with words

that were so very

well chosen.

Welcome to Dreamtown,

where the wicked and weary

don't exist...

Baring not two

but one perspective

A world without balance

is only destined to become

amiss.

Reviews

[Poems]

I like the concept of this. If the dreamer were to see the obstacles of real life and not the perfect scenarios manufactured by an inexperienced and naive imagination, those who are wicked would suddenly bring into light the real world in which we live. The last three lines are very true.

Great writing

Pendragon

[Kayli]

Thank you! I'm really glad that you were able to grasp the concept of it.

[Poems]

You're welcome, I've thought about the topic a lot as I've gotten older.

[EMMIE]

Creative! Unique concept too. I def. wanna go to dreamtown lol, you paint a good picture here, good imagery.

[Craba]

wow so nicely expressed and wonderful.

[zainul]

Amazing piece.
Dreamtown appears a perfect entity.
However,it is interesting to note that,"A world without balance
is only destined to become amiss."

[Kayli]

Thank you so much! I really, really appreciate that.

[zainul]

You are very welcome,dear friend.
I feel glad to know that you really appreciate that.