Dreamtown

Dreamtown

A Poem by Kayli
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Generically titled. But, you get my drift.

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Welcome to Dreamtown
The lights are always bright
and shining, illuminating
the life. The people, 
they are free,
like the birds 
that fly over the sea.
Their thoughts
-Unpredictable, 
Freely spoken
with words
that were so very
well chosen.
Welcome to Dreamtown,
where the wicked and weary
don't exist...
Baring not two
but one perspective
A world without balance
is only destined to become
amiss.

© 2012 Kayli


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I like the concept of this. If the dreamer were to see the obstacles of real life and not the perfect scenarios manufactured by an inexperienced and naive imagination, those who are wicked would suddenly bring into light the real world in which we live. The last three lines are very true.

Great writing

Pendragon

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kayli

12 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm really glad that you were able to grasp the concept of it.
Bare Trees

12 Years Ago

You're welcome, I've thought about the topic a lot as I've gotten older.



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I like the concept of this. If the dreamer were to see the obstacles of real life and not the perfect scenarios manufactured by an inexperienced and naive imagination, those who are wicked would suddenly bring into light the real world in which we live. The last three lines are very true.

Great writing

Pendragon

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kayli

12 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm really glad that you were able to grasp the concept of it.
Bare Trees

12 Years Ago

You're welcome, I've thought about the topic a lot as I've gotten older.
Creative! Unique concept too. I def. wanna go to dreamtown lol, you paint a good picture here, good imagery.

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow so nicely expressed and wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing piece.
Dreamtown appears a perfect entity.
However,it is interesting to note that,"A world without balance
is only destined to become amiss."

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kayli

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really, really appreciate that.
zainul

12 Years Ago

You are very welcome,dear friend.
I feel glad to know that you really appreciate that.

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Added on September 23, 2012
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Kayli
Kayli

Madrid, IA



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