For You

For You

A Poem by XxLovexLuckyxX

My mind is racing

Thinking all of this through,

My feet are pacing

While I'm screaming "It can't be true!"

 

The tears fall down

A heavy flow

Thinking of you

Makes them go

 

Finally I stop

Hoping you will return

Knowing you won't

I watch you as you burn

© 2009 XxLovexLuckyxX


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Wow this is powerful, i can feel this. Very well expressed. I like!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! So filled with emotion and loss. A very excellent write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Cool! i loved it!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 18, 2009

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XxLovexLuckyxX
XxLovexLuckyxX

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I love writing poems and listening to music. Yup. Music and writing are my drugs. New story up "Blood & Tears" please read :). I love feedback so I know what I can do to make my writing better .. more..

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