Lies

Lies

A Poem by XxLovexLuckyxX

You told me you loved me

I guess that was a lie

Aren't I a fool

For thinking you were my guy?

 

 

You told me you'd never hurt me

I guess that was a lie

I'm such a fool

For thinking you were mine

 

 

You told me you hated her

I guess that was a lie

I still remember when

It was your hand in mine

 

 

Always ment to be

That was you and me

I guess saying you were mine

Was just another lie...

 

 

 

 

© 2009 XxLovexLuckyxX


Author's Note

XxLovexLuckyxX
Dedicated to all those people who lied to me.

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I enjoyed reading this even though it is sad and so full of anger. Great way to release the pain. I agree with Voice in Thanking God that there are just as many truthfull people out there to balance out the liars.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I understand exactly where you are coming from. There are so many liars in the world but thank God there are just as many truthful people to balance it out. Sad write but definitely a wonderful release of emotion...

Voice


Posted 15 Years Ago


This is very sad. So full of emotion. Sorrow, anguish, pain. It's great that you can let your emotions out like this. There were a few parts where you repeated your rhymes, but that's fine. All in all, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in further writing. I'd love to read more!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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XxLovexLuckyxX
XxLovexLuckyxX

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I love writing poems and listening to music. Yup. Music and writing are my drugs. New story up "Blood & Tears" please read :). I love feedback so I know what I can do to make my writing better .. more..

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