Other wise known as...

Other wise known as...

A Poem by XxLovexLuckyxX

Promises made

 

But not kept

 

Other wise known as Broken

 

Friends who are no longer

 

Ones we trust or care for

 

Other wise known as Memories

 

People we meet

 

And fall in love with

 

Only to have them break our hearts

 

Other wise known as What Could Have Been

 

Dreams that haunt us

 

Other wise known as Nightmares

 

Things we all wish

 

Would just dissapear

 

The things that are to come

 

Other wise known as the Future.

 

You choose

 

You are other wise known as your choice......

© 2009 XxLovexLuckyxX


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Destiny!

I think you could have made this a little better if you followed a structure where 3 or 2 lines for each theme. Since at one point there is only one line for one point. I would have liked to see another line or two for some theme.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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XxLovexLuckyxX

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I love writing poems and listening to music. Yup. Music and writing are my drugs. New story up "Blood & Tears" please read :). I love feedback so I know what I can do to make my writing better .. more..

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