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A by XxLovexLuckyxX

You told me to take a chance

 

I took it

 

You told me to come back

 

I can't

 

You ask why not

 

I say "Because she makes me just as happy as you do"

 

You start to cry

 

I reach out to hug you one last time

 

You turn away

 

I turn away too

 

Both of us crying

 

Both of us knowing it will be the last time

 

We see eachother

 

Touch eachother

 

Talk to eachother

 

Love eachother

© 2009 XxLovexLuckyxX


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For me your words remind us that the people we love still hold a small piece of us even when we know it is time to move on. You bring to mind one in particular for me whose face I always see whenever I have a bad moment full of regrets. beautiful work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Great emotions here.. you have moved on and that is good sometimes.. if you love someone else but still have feelings for another then sometimes people just have to keep distance.. shouldn't turn to past.. it's still sad when we lose someone close to us or special. If you found someone as good as the person that you are letting go.. then you are most likely doing the right thing.. if another relationship ended then it most likely was not meant to be.. good luck.. and thank you for sharing!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 1, 2009

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I love writing poems and listening to music. Yup. Music and writing are my drugs. New story up "Blood & Tears" please read :). I love feedback so I know what I can do to make my writing better .. more..

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