Maybe

Maybe you could have helped her

 

Maybe you could have saved her

 

Maybe you could have done something

 

Maybe if you looked

 

You could have seen

 

What she went through

 

Maybe...Just maybe

 

You could be diffrent

Reviews

[Plexiglass]

This is a good poem. Maybe it speaks to me directly, I dunno. I think the best thing about this is how relateable it is. To some people. Because I know myself in particular, some people have this feeling of waiting. Of just expecting or hoping someone will notice them. Notice their hurting, notice they're hurting or what have you. And with that shared idea in mind when I read this I find this poem successful. There isn't much there though and you can always expand. Like who is the she? How could the reader be different? Stuff like that which may just lead you to an entirely different poem. But good work.