The feeling

The feeling

A Poem by XxLovexLuckyxX

The feeling is strong

 

You hold me in your arms

 

You say you love me

 

I say I love you too.

 

The words are lies

 

The feeling is fading

 

You hug me

 

You say you love me

 

I say I like you too

 

The words are lies

 

The feeling is gone

 

You touch me

 

You say you miss me

 

 I say I miss you too

 

The words, this time are true.

 

 

 

 

© 2008 XxLovexLuckyxX


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that is truly amazing! i see talent here. i mean that truthfully!

Posted 15 Years Ago


WOW

hunni this is amazing......you're 13 years old......WOW I love it.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 5, 2008

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XxLovexLuckyxX

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I love writing poems and listening to music. Yup. Music and writing are my drugs. New story up "Blood & Tears" please read :). I love feedback so I know what I can do to make my writing better .. more..

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