Tell me

Ummm.........I don't know...

 

Hold my hand and tell me you care,

 

tell me why.

 

I'm still standing here...Waiting...

 

Tell me why.

 

Hold my hand and tell me you care,

 

even if you dont.

 

I'm scared to break,

 

all you do is hate.

 

Why?

 

Hold my hand and tell me you care.

 

Tell me

 

Author's Note

Yes I Dani if you read this that it doesn't rhyme. I get it. Okay yea...Review!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[DollFacedKiller]

Sometimes it isn't enough to just hear the words, you need to know the why and how. This is a sweet piece with a deep meaning hunni xxx

[alyssa]

I like it!! i feel the same way!!! you have lots of potantail!! keep writing!!
hugs
alyssa

[Last Lying Look]

I really like this.
It's kind of beautiful and sad and definitely relatable.
Excellent write!
-E.M.R