...

 

Is it fate?

 

Is it hate?

 

So much stuff,

 

I can't concentrate.

 

You said you cared,

 

You said you'd be there.

 

By my side

 

Till the day I die.

 

Was it a game?

 

Am I insane?

 

Can you see the tears,

 

I cried for years?

 

Can you see the pain?

 

Do you feel the same?

 

You said you were diffrent

 

so prove me wrong.

 

Tell me the truth

 

or else I'm gone.

 

No

 

It's not fate.

 

It's not hate.

 

Maybe now you can concentrate.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

P.S- Sorry I haven't gotten on lately. I've been going through some very serious things, therefor, not allowing me to get on and write. I wrote this because hate always triggers me to write something. Recently me and my gf broke up and she told me to never talk to her again when I have no idea what I did. That being said, it has made me very angry towards her because she is the one that did everything. Enough of my babbling. Comment, message, rate. PLEASE! I need something!!!!

 

 

 !!!!!!!!!

 

 

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

I really like this piece.
My favorite part was:
"No
It's not fate.
It's not hate.
Maybe now you can concentrate."
That was a really profound statment. So strong.
Great poem!
-E.M.R

[XxLovexLuckyxX]

Well, that is my last poem. I've given up on my writing. Enjoy.