So Sorry

I had a dream in which I killed myself. It was so weird. This is pretty much what I thought when I woke up.

I'm so sorry

Mom and Dad,

I didn't really mean

To make you that mad.

 

I'm so sorry

Dear friends,

I didn't mean

To tell them,

Or hurt you.

 

I'm so sorry

God,

That I meaant to

Slit my wrist.

Please just forgive me.

Please tell

My parents

And my friends,

That it really didn't hurt.

Tell my parents

And my friends,

That this is something

That just

Had to happen.

 

Tell my parents

And my friends,

To remember that

I said

"I'm so Sorry."

Author's Note

Did you like it? Should I change some of the words?

Reviews

[Lesley]

i like it it's just fine so don't change it
it's honest and true
really amazing

[Tenten]

it quick but honest and your voice comes through even as the words whisper a desperate plea. 3rd para, 3rd line, mispelled 'meant'. otherwise the honesty and voice gives the piece very much life.