Love <3

Love <3

A Poem by Kayla Marie
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all in the title^^

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Love

Love isn’t about money.

Love isn’t about looks.

Love isn’t about having to be with the opposite sex.

Love is about being with the one that makes you happy.

It’s that feeling you get in you’r tummy when the person you like texts you.

It’s what makes you nervous around you’r crush.

Its that thing that keeps that one person in your mind.

It’s that sparkle in you’r eyes.

It’s what keeps you’r heart beating.

It’s....Love

© 2012 Kayla Marie


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Sam
Very nice, I do want to address that there's a spelling error with "you'r" there isn't an apostrophe in that word. But besides that, it's very good.

100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very touching...I don't know if this was intentional or not but you kept saying you'r. Even if you were saying you're it would be grammatically incorrect because you're represents you are...your would be the best choice. Again, this is true and well-written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice poem. This is very nice. I like what u wrote about. This explains a lot. But the one thing is, If love is not about dating the opposit sex what is is. How do you love someone that is not the oppisite sex then u r?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kayla Marie

11 Years Ago

Nope I'm not lesbian I am bi and I support people that are (:
Jocie

11 Years Ago

eww
Kayla Marie

11 Years Ago

Um ok?

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Added on December 8, 2012
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Kayla Marie
Kayla Marie

Canaan, ME



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I was born june 9th 1999, Playing guitar and drawing is my life more..

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