I am alone

I feel as though I am alone,

Even if I am around people

It's like I am in a bubble,

Where no one can come in,

And I cannot come out.

I don't want to be alone anymore.

I want to find that one person,

that will be the one to pop my bubble of loneliness.

Till then I wait.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

POP!! You are NOT alone. You are amongst friends here. I think if someone "enters" this bubble of yours, they should start with a great hug to remember them by!! I love the first line "introduction" ....leading into the other ones "I feel THIS, I feel THIS, I feel THIS etc..." and then the last line. .....till then I wait. LOVE it. Great job, Kayla. xoxo -Mark

[Phillitup]

This is exactly how I feel. I like the simplicity of this sadness. This is well penned...

[Kayla Marie]

Thank you :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

we all live in bubbles at some time in our hopefully long lives..you put your feelings over very well in this poem. You can blow bubbles in the air and some will bounce off one another yet some will stick together..Your bubble WILL come along

[Kayla Marie]

Thank you, I try my best on my writing. And I hope that it does come along :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

It is clear that you are quite young...in comparison..I am quite old....Life is a long song

[Brookypoo]

wow...this is truly amazing,awesome,remarkable. keep the good work up.

[Kayla Marie]

thank you so much

[Brookypoo]

your welcum...any time.