Wonder Why I Called You My Friend

Wonder why the friend I thought was you, you act so undercover when we are together. You smiled and act like my feelings means a lot but when you are around other people - its like you laugh in my face and don't care nothing about me. With a loud voice, you said to me "You will always be my friend but it was just a joke." but guess what I found out that you are not worth my time. I must depart from you.

Love Kaye.
4/20/2016

I thought you were my friend but I must go on in life.

Reviews

[Elmarie]

Try and look at your sentence structure, some sentences could be too long. Also have a look at your tenses and try to not mix them up. We all need good friends like me need air to breath. :)