You are my hero

New song, In the work

 

You are my Hero

The day that I met you I instantly knew

your the one I need the your the one for me.

My heart races every time I think about you

And knowing I can't be by your side

makes a war erupt in my eyes

Tears like the soldiers falling one by one.


You are my hero, you are my morning sun

the one who dries my tears when the day is done



My life was in Ruin before I met you

but now all my dreams are coming true

We might be miles apart, but i've never felt closer to someone



You are my hero you saved me from me,

You saved me from the fear of being alone

 

I regret ever thinking of leaving this world behind

 Thinking no-one would ever be mine


The sky Turned Grey to blue

The day that I met you


Your my Hero, My best Friend.

My Only love until the end

 

Author's Note

a Song For my Bf

Reviews

[Theresa]

This is such a romantic piece that is raw and full of true honest feelings. That is what makes it so great. My favorite lines are:
"And knowing I can't be by your side
makes a war erupt in my eyes
Tears like the soldiers falling one by one."
The way you play on the words war, soldier, hero it all links together and flows great. There was a few typos, but nothing major, but other then that Great job.

[SLUR the Music Junkie]

^^

[Undying Glory]

wow just great. i really like the description and feelings, really cool. just rocks