Never Quite

Never Quite

A Poem by A Glow in the Pit of My Soul


I was at my second wake in two weeks, 
dressed all in black, 
wearing lipstick and looking sad, 
(just like any other day) --
when a woman came up to me 
with gold buttons on her jacket 
and she asked, 


“Are you still a poet? 
Do you still write?” 

with a wistful look in her eye. 

And I couldn't quite 
word my response properly, 

“Yes, I am, but not... not right now” 

Just like every time I try 
to put my thoughts on paper, I can 
never quite 
get the words 
to 
sound 
right.

© 2015 A Glow in the Pit of My Soul


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A clever and an emotive piece. I can relate to. I like how you write, the structure of your poem is beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


A Glow in the Pit of My Soul

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much ♡ it's nice to get feedback on the structure too!
poet was kind of a dirtyword when i was in school, so i was always afraid to admit to real live folks that i was a poet in the beginning . . . i have noticed now that poets are kinda cool, the rock stars of the modern world

and why shouldn't they be?

just maybe not right now . . .

Posted 10 Years Ago


A Glow in the Pit of My Soul

10 Years Ago

I was actually sort of shocked she called me a poet. I rarely even call myself a writer... "I write".. read more
Emily B

10 Years Ago

You have a natural talent and seem well-read. It is a real pleasure to find you here!
A Glow in the Pit of My Soul

10 Years Ago

Thank you doll, it's nice to be here!

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