Outside

Just a thing I wrote, been feeling very left out lately.

Do you ever get that feeling, you will always be on the outside?

Whatever the situation, the incident, the activity.

I'm willing to bet on all i own, 

It would never, by choice, involve me. 

That's not to say its done with intention,

And sometimes, it is an outcome of my creation,

So focused on my own detonation, 

That in the moment, I have a revelation. 

And I know I will always survive. 

Even if it be, only half alive. 

And I see there struggle of including me.

So for their sake, outside I must be.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading :)

Reviews

[Kami]

Aside from changing "there" to "their", I thought this was powerful. Who hasn't felt like an outsider in their own life? You put that feeling in understandable terms.