Grief

I grieve for a life that never was, or could ever be.

And yet it feels so real, 

As real as you are to me. 

I grieve for a life that never was, or could ever be.

And yet the flashbacks are so true, 

As real as me looking at you. 

Author's Note

This is a somewhat work in process. In other words, I think it needs more, but I don't know where to go with it right now. So I'm posting what I have so far, and may edited at a later date.

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

Should the title read 'Born to be betrayed' KayT?

[DarkStar]

I muddled my titles up. But that sounds better for another piece I'm working on. Thank you!

[Tony Jordan]

Oh right you are.
:)
This is a fine piece of writing, conveying the pain really effectively.