Self-Fulfilling Prophecy

Self-Fulfilling Prophecy

A Poem by DarkStar

You said it, so I did,

Commanded, so I gave,

And all the while, deny deny,

The truth, inside remains.

 

My desires, are hard to reach,

Yours somewhat, more insight,

So better than to fail at mine,

Is to see your face delight.

© 2017 DarkStar


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Great flow and very easy to follow! Sad but beautifully written.

Is the beginning of the line hinting at an abusive or unbalanced relationship? ("You said it, so I did") That is what I'm picking up from that line, but I'm not sure.

Can't wait to see more work in the future!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkStar

7 Years Ago

Unbalanced, most definitely. Abusive, perhaps. Thank you so much for reading :)



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Great flow and very easy to follow! Sad but beautifully written.

Is the beginning of the line hinting at an abusive or unbalanced relationship? ("You said it, so I did") That is what I'm picking up from that line, but I'm not sure.

Can't wait to see more work in the future!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkStar

7 Years Ago

Unbalanced, most definitely. Abusive, perhaps. Thank you so much for reading :)

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DarkStar
DarkStar

Manchester, United Kingdom



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I also put pieces on other sites, under the names of DD. and DarkStar7 - So if you see those names on other sites, then you may just have found me! ---------------------------------------------------.. more..

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