Gave all, gained nothing!

I wrote this after a break up

Gave all, gained nothing!

“I gave you my heart but in return I have received was a broken chain, the chain you only wrapped on yourself because you love to play games, you say you love me but chose to remain from me. Choosing others before me as if I was never apart of you, "Love is a creation but dies when it is driven from emotion"

Author's Note

I apologise for any Grammatical errors, I write directly from my head to platform.

Reviews

[s y e]

This is great, Kieran.
A couple of grammatical errors to fix but other than that fabby.
It's really relatable, pretty sure we would have all been in this position once or twice, I know I have...!

[Kieran James Waite]

Thank you for the feedback S y e, means a lot. This is my first time sharing my writing.

[s y e]

Well, welcome to WritersCafe, it's a fantastic site. You'll be a massive hit.

[Kieran James Waite]

Aww thank you S y e!