look at what you made me do...

look at what you made me do...

A Poem by kayBiE
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love story of a hurt girl facing a lot of pain

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Why did you have yo go?

You promised not to leave me

you said I am perfect for you

But perfect now seems too overdue.


I didn't mean to tie you down on this chair

but no one can have you but me

You choose me and I will let you be

we already joined our blood 

But you have forgotten that

LOOK AT WHAT YOU HAVE MADE ME DO!!!


I slit your face

And cut your tongue out

remove your mouth including your eyes and ears

Because if you didn't see her, nor heard her beautiful

personality, you wouldn't have kissed her.


I chopped your hands off,

your dick and cut your heart out of your chest

Because if you couldn't feel

you wouldn't have touched her

and fell in love with her

then later making love to her instead of me!!


Now I'm talking to what is left of you

including the parts i cut off.

I didn't mean to kill you, you left me no choice

Now I have no choice but to

set your body on fire and leave

no evidence


#Sigh we could have been together by now

Forgive me... 

© 2012 kayBiE


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Yikes! That is one woman you do not want to cross in life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Goodness is the word that springs to mind with this piece :)
Very good writing and excellent story behind it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thanx

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Some woman could be dangerous. I like the direction of this poem. Allow the reader to fall into story of revenge and lost love. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very.... interesting. I liked the gore in the poem. Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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kayBiE
kayBiE

johannesburg, CA, South Africa



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