all the demons bow to me

all the demons bow to me

A Poem by kayBiE

Leave!!!
Leave my blood to run
Let it lead me to my death my sweet hell
The Lord picked me up when I fell
But the Devil gave me something that left me clung to the ground

Royal demoness that's what he calls me
Queen of the fallen angel is how he portrayed me
Yes a picture he painted in my heart that only he can see it

No I'm not evil I'm just ill got money on my mind
So I slit my wrists and pretend that they are paper racks

He keeps me coming back for more
I devour him day and night I just can't seem to let go
Each piece of his flash that I rip off just heals again
I'm addicted to his immortality
I don't mind reigning at his side

Burning in hell but he keeps me cool
How can one be so evil yet so kind?
How can one extinguish fire with fire?
Hehehe, an inferno.

Now all the demons bow to me.

© 2012 kayBiE


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"Though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I shall fear no evil--for I am the most evil thing that's ever walked through that valley in all time."

This poem made me think of that line--it's really awesome! I love the tones of lust and fire, submission and domination, a destructible relationship that both can take comfort in the other's corruption. That's my take on this, anyway. It's cool :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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punctuations are powerful. use it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A interesting and fun poem to read. If we dance with the Devil. You will find him. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem. I did like the ending.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


To me, it reminds me of how we'd want to do the right thing, but it's so much easier to do wrong because that's what we desire. Interesting write! ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I shall fear no evil--for I am the most evil thing that's ever walked through that valley in all time."

This poem made me think of that line--it's really awesome! I love the tones of lust and fire, submission and domination, a destructible relationship that both can take comfort in the other's corruption. That's my take on this, anyway. It's cool :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohh, and why is that so?

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it. Demons bowing is one of my favorite protrayals of worship, to be honest.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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kayBiE

johannesburg, CA, South Africa



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