The Land of Broken Promises

A brief poem I wrote describing some thoughts I've had following a recent sad happening.

The Land of Broken Promises


There's a land of broken promises
And you built it
With every lie you told
With every oath you broke
You laid the foundation
And constructed this wretched dystopia

Reviews

[Tsubaki Kuro]

Even though that this poem you wrote is short, it is very powerful. Nice work.

[Kawaiikitty96]

thanks! I appreciate your feedback

[emipoemi]

......I second this (took the words out of my mouth). Very well done indeed!