Broken

I'm not going to bother going into detail about this. It's obvious that I'm heartbroken. I know it's not really that creative, but I just wrote down what I was feeling, and that's what matters, right?

Broken

I tried so hard

Not to fall

But you kept pushing

And I fell

Stupid heart

You should've known

This wasn't right

You should've never given in

Now I'm shattered

torn

battered

worn

And most of all--broken

Reviews

[Warren Daniel II]

Short and simple, writing is not about using the biggest words or the most creative thoughts its about expressing ones feelings within a genuine,honest manner and that's what you did right here.

[Kawaiikitty96]

Very true. Thanks!

[Jamestown]

So sad when one feels broken, I pray you will be ok! The write is simple but heart
felt. Great job expressing yourself, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Kawaiikitty96]

Thanks so much