Snowglobe

An allegorical poem about life problems that one cannot escape

     Snowglobe

The frigid wind

Chaps my skin

    As I trek through the icy storm

     I don thick clothes

     From head to toes

   But I lack security and warmth

I look up at the sky

And I realize

I'm trapped, and there's no way out

I can't take it

I can't make it

Into my head comes many doubts

Despite my hard work

Despite my kind words

  I receive no reward

I'm stuck in this sitch

Life is a b***h

The entrapment cuts like a sword

Reviews

[Moving Mass]

It's almost like being hundreds of meters underwater; no matter where you go there's no escape, even when you see the surface. It's like torture. I like how you put it Viv.

[Kawaiikitty96]

Exactly. Thanks for your review :)

[Roger Turgeon]

and like a snowglobe...others looking in don't see what you feel

[Kawaiikitty96]

Yes, that's true

[Jaxter_Nick]

Verry nice job on this, reminds me of getting off the school bus and finding myself locked outside the house in the middle of winter...

[Kawaiikitty96]

Thanks for your review :)