Beyond Brotherly Love: A Hikaru and Kaoru Yaoi-Chapter 1

In this chapter, Hikaru Hitachiin notices his brother acting rather strangely and tries to see what the matter is.

Chapter 1

   Kaoru:  It was another fine day in the Ouran High School Host Club.  Tamaki sat on a sofa with his feet propped up and a reluctant and frustrated Haruhi under his arm.  Kyoya was trying to auction off some photo books of us he had compiled.  In the corner, Honey and Mori were indulging in some cheesecake.  Everywhere you turned, ladies, overwhelmed by the sheer beauty of the hosts, were dropping to the floor.  I gazed in awe as my twin brother, Hikaru, poured a cup of tea for a guest

Hikaru:     I handed a cup of tea I had just poured to an awaiting guest. Making sure we had the attention of our clients, as we usually did, I cupped my brother's face in my hands.  "You're my cup of tea, Kaoru," I professed, putting on my usual performance for the ladies.  "Hikaru, you're my sweeg cream and sugar!" he exclaimed, embracing me in an affectionate hug.  Flabbergasted from our theatrics, our clients squealed like mice in a cheese factory.  There was something exceptionally peculiar about my brother that day.  His eyes seemed a little more pleading and bubbly than usual.  He behaved nervously, shaking as he filled a girl's cup with tea. "Be careful, Kaoru! Though I always pretended to be worried for my brother in order to impress our guests, my concern was genuine at this moment.  He almost upset the teapot, which could have hurt both himself and one of our guests.  I took over and topped off the lady's cup, then took Kaoru aside.  "What's with you? You're shaking unnaturally, your pupils are dialated like a cat's, and you're acting like you're about to cry.  Averting his gaze, Kaoru gently shoved me out the way.  "It's nothing," he muttered.

Kaoru:     Was he blind?  Coildn't he tell that his touch let me breathless?  From that moment, I knew that would be the day I would confess.  Throughout our youth, I had always felt a twinge for Hikaru that exceeded brotherly love.  For too long, I had supressed my feelings for him.  When we became members of Tamaki Senpai's host club, we found that women find a male homosexual relationship very romantic, and being twins, Hikaru and me being in a romantic partnership would be considered taboo. Forbidden love is intriguing, thus, attracting more women.  From then on, Hikaru and I took aevantage of the fact that we were twins and put on an incestual, homosexual performance for the guests of the Ouran Host Club.  It was quite enjoyable: every touch from Hikaru gave me butterflies.  It killed me, however, to know it was nothing more than a sgow meant to bring more business to our club.  Maybe deep down Hikaru did have feelings for me such as mine for him, 

Author's Note

This part doesn't have anything too mature, but expect some in either chapter 2 or 3. Thanks for reading! Let me know what you think! Characters belong to Bisco Hatori and Funimation.

Reviews

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

Its so sweet >_< I really like hikaru and kaoru's brotherly love hehehe...
Ouran are one of the animes that catches my attention hehehe it was really hilarious.
I really like it that you made a fan fic for it hehehe.. too bad tamaki has haruchi, it would be nice to pair him with kyouya hahaha

Continue this i wanna read more. I wanna know how would they end up with their relationship in your plot ^_^

i want to make a suggestion or more like a request, can you make the words font size bigger? you see for the readers like me, my visual acuity is not that good. Just in case you have other readers with the same vision problem as mine ^_^

Then the spelling of some words needs to be check.

overall it was simple, good and easily understood. keep it up. ^_^

[Kawaiikitty96]

Thanks :) I'm glad you like it. I actually do think shipping Kyoya and Tamaki is kind of sexy, in fact, I've read a few yaoi fan fics about them, but I love Tamaki and Haruhi as a couple. I'll be posting more chapters soon, one of which gets to the dirty part XD, so stay tuned! I'll work on my spelling and grammar, and I'll see what I can do as far as changing the font. Thanks so much for your review!

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

Good luck, i'll look forward to read your works. ^_^

[Kawaiikitty96]

As soon as I can get on my PC, I will make the font bigger on this chapter. I just uploaded chapter 2, but the font is a little small on it too :( I will change them both when I can get on my PC.

[Kawaiikitty96]

Nevermind, I just changed the font on both ^.^

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

ok ^_^

[Jellel the great]

This is really good so far

[Sheik]

A perfect depiction of the host club.

[Kawaiikitty96]

Why thank you :)