A Race of a loser....

Most great people have attained their greatest success just one step beyond their greatest failure..

One more day along the world to go,
Old days are clinged to me to and fro.
Not today but there will be a day,
When crowd will call me a star in fey.
Lame scum people do win at last,
You cant change time,it is time to change your past.
I have looked beautiful because I have friends as reward,
Success hurts,when you don't have friends to celebrate with award.

Reviews

[Gee]

What point life if no one to share both the highs and lows. Enjoyed your poetry

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you dear Gee. Package full of smile. Stay connected.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"I have looked beautiful because I have friends as reward,
Success hurts,when you don't have friends to celebrate with award."
Awards not celebrated. Had small value. Thank you Randhir for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Randhir kaur]

A bunch of thanks Coyote. My pleasure.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you...loads of smiles...good luck for your work..keep reading and writing.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you...loads of smiles...good luck for your work..keep reading and writing.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you...loads of smiles...good luck for your work..keep reading and writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[iamshadowine]

amazingly framed! loved your work! keep writing! :D

[Randhir kaur]

Yea sure I will...Thank you for time Shadowine.

[Ehra Khan]

This is such a meaningful write.Don't let anything put you down. keep moving forward! :)

[Randhir kaur]

Thanks Inaya for pushing me forward by your words dear..Stay connected.

[Avinash]

Not giving up and staying focused to your purpose, any successful person will tell to wannabes. In the meantime you have to learn not to let distractions affect your motivation. And in the end everything is about sharing.

[Randhir kaur]

Yes Avinash...Thank you for your time dear...Stay connected.

[LastMonth]

Short and nice.
Thoughtful messege and thought invoking.
Good job.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you dear LastMonth for your words..

[Rafeeq Hawkins]

Love this poem