Philosophy of life...

This is where we live. The world of love if u make it,if u see it...

Ocean of glass, walls of water,
It's an illusion, a chimera, this world of love.
In this world, whoever went,
is just gone..
Stay of fireballs on sands of snow..
Story of softness in hot deserts..
Where the mirror of memories breaks,
shadows of truth can be seen everywhere..
The clouds are golden and there is a rain of stones..
It's all illusion, this world of love.
In this world, whoever went,
is just gone..
In this world of heart, there are no boundaries,
In the eyes full of pain, respite doesn't sleep.
All the feelings that are there, is an unquenched thirst.
The philosophy of life is hidden in the refuge of love.
Winds of sunshine, gardens of thorns,
It's an illusion, this world of love.
In this world, whoever went,
is just gone..

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even though we always have our memories---yes, love in life is like living with mirrors...lots of reflection, but the physical image, the real one...when it is gone, it is gone...

a nice reflection of reality here...

j.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you Jacob for the feedback.

[Art Sun]

nice work, love is so filled with different emotions, and yet we so part of this love you express within your thoughts...

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you Art..

[iamshadowine]

such a pretty poem! loved it! keep writing :D

[Randhir kaur]

Thanks Shadowine..

[Anindita Janhabee]

Its been so pleasant reading your sweet work... I appreciate the way you have presented the poem, with two lines repeating over and over making the reader more attracted towards it... I just love poems like this.. Keep it up..

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you so much dear Anindita...Keep reading. Stay tuned.

[Myblindeye]

your writing is very unique and forces your readers to think. This is what I look for when I read. Its great work.

[Randhir kaur]

Many thanks for reading this blindeye..I am glad that you found it unique,I appreciate..

[stargirl23]

I really liked this, especially with the repetition of "It's all illusion."

[Randhir kaur]

Thanks Adi for your appreciation..

[I am that I am]

I like this a lot. It captures the essence of both points of view. To many people, love can be an illusory thing, imagined and unreal. To many others, love can be all that they see around them, a reality in all things. Duality is an amazing thing, and this poem captures it's essence. Great job, Randhir.

[Randhir kaur]

Yeah...Thank u for sparing ur minute...Stay connected..

[Coyote Poetry]

Love and faith. Some place to be learn and understood.
"It's an illusion, this world of love.
In this world, whoever went,
is just gone.."
I believe love is earned and kept. Like love for our children. I liked your description and your thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Randhir kaur]

O thank u Coyote...I am happy that you liked it..Thank u for your time..

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Richard🖌]

Whew!
Well, Randhir,
This is a poignant piece to me, M'Dearest, for one whose heart, mind, and soul is obviously filled to overflowing with love, hope, and sweetness, it is, also, obvious your eyes are not closed to the relative/opposite sides of love, and this speaks volumes to the bright depths of your intelligence and wisdom … you are no naive girl, this is for sure, and the best part of it is you know HOW to, and how NOT to, LOVE.
Free Verse poetry can possess a powerful voice, and when spoken properly can bore and delve deep into our beings, as your keen, knowing words here have into my own.
Randhir, with this excellently composed work of emotional and philosophical exactitude, you've reached inside and touched me to the core, exactly how splendidly rendered poetry should.

Truly, I am already becoming a fan of yours; thank you, Dear Lady-Poet … hugs to you! ⁓ Richard

[Randhir kaur]

Hey Richard..it is too much for me dear...I guess I don't deserve these words but indeed m blessed and overwhelmed by ur precious word..Thank u so very much for attention paid..
Regards~Randhir kaur~

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, too, Randhir! : )
I feel blessed, as-well, to know you! ⁓ RJ

[Randhir kaur]

Very Nice to know that Richard...Stay updated..

[Richard🖌]

I'll do my best to! ; )