I will wait ...

This is a real story based on my friend's experience. Waiting is a sign of true love and patience. Not everyone like her can wait and prove its true...A heart that loves is always young..

He never did come but his sweet moments always drived me crazy.
My madness became so wild with a desire to meet him yesterday and today destroyed my peace forever.
I heard someone at the door and thought that god have listened my prayer.
And when opened I see that the harsh wind ridiculed and left me unsaid...

Author's Note

Hope this simple,casual write can make u feel the same as what it did to me. I feel that my pal shall stay in peace onwards because her feelings is not of her alone but now a part of our anguish.

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Dear, this poem left me with some kind of curiosity... I loved the entire work but I failed to understand the last part in a better way. Of course, you had written it beautifully but curiosity will keep on hunting... It's my sincere request to you please let me know about the complete story. Thanks..
Anindita : )

[Antoñyo]

Nice piece deceivingly powerful with emotion, and I like that the description adds even more; so true that not everyone can wait...hits home a bit.

Thanks for sharing

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Longfellow's Psalm of Life ends with "learn to labour and to wait." Endurance is something which can be easily talked of but is difficult in practical life. Everything needs waiting- a lover has to wait for the one whom he; or she, loves, a writer has to wait to see his book in print, a sportsman has to wait to reach on top of his game.
The last two lines add to imagery and did capture my imagination.
A good concise, short poem, written in free-verse, but a good one to read.
Well-written. Keep writing.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank u Vatsal for ur appreciation..

[Coyote Poetry]

Waiting is very hard. I do understand this poem. I like the thoughts and need to see another. Thank you Randhir for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Randhir kaur]

The anguish of my pal was so deep that it compelled me to pen a verse like this..Thanks Coyote for appreciating..

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you re welcome.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you. :-)

[Nailah Baniti]

Peace Randhir, excellent way to express anxiety, the wait, of not accepting the present moment, the want for what want. That's what I took from this heART. Love iT!

[Randhir kaur]

Ever many thanks Nailah. I am so happy that u loved it..Blessed. Stay tuned..

[hardeep sabharwal]

why this happens, why not everyone gets love,
it is an emotional write and you conveyed feelings well

[Randhir kaur]

Thank u Hardeep ji...

[Insight "MH"]

Pure emotions! you have done so well in describing her feelings as if they were yours.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank u Insight for having a look...

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome.

[B J Hughes]

You have portrayed her yearning so realistically. And then the great anticipation that her prayer had been answered only to have her hopes dashed by, very appropriately, an empty wind. Beautifully written.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank u Sir.. I am glad to hear that...

[B J Hughes]

You are very welcome :o)