Journey with you...

Journey with you...

A Story by Randhir kaur
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In Every person's life there is a TEACHER who pushes him to the next plateau. For me its only you dear SOBHA Teacher..

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School life was quite amazing and crazy,
Distance later turned our relation to b easy.
I felt u so unique when I was in class four,
Because u entered in the class only to wish me from the core.
Keen was my interest towards ur every lesson,
So strict but more genial are u than any person.
Last ten-five minutes break used to b always for fun,
Your Santa-Banta jokes and d enchanting talks can do none.
Sitting beside u in the bus was a good feeling,
Celebrating our Birthday together was another special meaning.
I know Teacher I hurted u by not participating in the parade,
I apologize for my stupid mistake that I had made.
If ever I hve had done anything wrong,forgive me for that insult,
And today I am embarassed that I could not give u a good result.
Thanks to u,after d departure u gave a message on 3rd January'20 thirteen,
How happy I was,really can't express d emotions u made in.
Since then you have captivated my heart and soul,
You have lighten my life and gave a new mould.
Whenever I think of you,my day goes with a smile,
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You r my luckycharm,I think of u everyday so dat I can walk a mile.
You were always more of a Mother,than of a Teacher,
Giving a gentle feel on d impressionable minds about every gifts of nature.
Your every message creates a strong thought in my mind,
You will never knnow that how lucky I am u to find.
There's no one quite like a special Teacher,and no Teacher quite as special as you.
I would Thank you from d bottom of my heart,but for you my heart has no bottom.
I love you for all that you are,all that you have been and all you are yet to be..
Heart to Heart-Soul to Soul..Our relation to be continued......

© 2016 Randhir kaur


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Dear writer, truly it's amazing how you could rhyme the entire story in this way... If anyone would hv told me to write something like this, I would kinda write a short story instead of a poem... well done... I loved the last part heart to heart, soul to soul... our relation to be continued...
keep it up!!!
Anindita : )

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dear writer, truly it's amazing how you could rhyme the entire story in this way... If anyone would hv told me to write something like this, I would kinda write a short story instead of a poem... well done... I loved the last part heart to heart, soul to soul... our relation to be continued...
keep it up!!!
Anindita : )

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it reminded me my school days, nice read, well expressed

Posted 8 Years Ago


Randhir kaur

8 Years Ago

Thank you Hardeep Sir..
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To know the value of teachers. A wise person.
"I love you for all that you are,all that you have been and all you are yet to be..
Heart to Heart-Soul to Soul..Our relation to be continued....."
Our elders and teachers. Builders of our life. Thank you Randhir for sharing the excellent story.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


Randhir kaur

8 Years Ago

Many thanks Coyote for ur kind review..My Teachers are the reason why I am able to write today..Thei.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

We need teachers and examples. They did a good job and you are welcome.
Randhir kaur

8 Years Ago

Yeah u absolutely right..Again a Thanks...Stay tuned..

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Added on February 8, 2016
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Randhir kaur
Randhir kaur

Jorhat, Assam, India



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