Life..

Life is too ironic to fully understand. It takes sadness to knw wat happiness is,noise to appreciate silence n absence to value presence..

The Days & Nights
are silent,
Only the tears seems
to be violent..
I gave them love and
respect,
A bit of something
least I suspect..
The moments
passed are in glaring
frames,
Some loved me &
others said the
clumsy names..
The dear ones turned
me into aggressive
flames,
My heart warned me
but I did certain
claims..
An irreversible regret
and an unheard
request,
An unspeakable
secret and an
unreachable quest..
Still life is being about
happy anyhow,
So simply summed
up in words,"LIFE
must go all the way
rest"..

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
great flow and clear message, life has it's good
and bad times (balance) thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Randhir kaur]

Thanks James...loads of smile...Stay connected dear..

[Art Sun]

nice work, yes life is filled with a balance of each moment, each realization, each act that we encompass ourselves with, nice work.

The end of your poem left a questionable expression, otherwise a very nice work

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you Art...yea I left it such,my emotions took a turn...well,that's funny buddy..sorry for that..Keep reading.

[Happy hours]

a beautiful piece...thanks for sharing... :)

[Randhir kaur]

Thank u..glad to know that..

[Nailah Baniti]

Peace Randhir, subtle, yet potent. Thank you :)

[Randhir kaur]

Is it..Thank u Nailah..

[stargirl23]

Beautiful write and the poem flows really nice!

[Randhir kaur]

Thanks Adi for appreciating...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right.
"So simply summed
up in words,"LIFE
must go all the way
rest"..
Hard or easy journey. We must go forward. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Randhir kaur]

Thank u Coyote..

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[-inactive now-]

Very nice flow and rhyme, well done :)

[Randhir kaur]

Thank u so mch Inactive...

[Mary Helda]

Yes my dear,life must certainly go on with all its ironies and twists...…well penned!!

[Randhir kaur]

Thats right Mary...Thanx for having a look..

[Mary Helda]

you are welcome

[zunie frost]

i love it !!! great job !! have a hysterical time reading it

[Randhir kaur]

Glad to hear it..Many Thanx Zunie..

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!!