Two thousand sixteen...

For last year's words belong to last year's language and this year's words await another voice. Be open to changes.

Take a step,be reluctant,
Grab every moment,don't be persistent..
He will be kindin a form to u,
If u learn to throw smile on few..
At hard times,stay cool,
Who make resolutions r a fool..
Do u predict ur future??
Make ur present nurture..
Today u start a trip,
Endeavour surreal things n grip..
Pen is in ur hand,
Parable u create grains in sand..
A very Happy New Year...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed and I liked your words.
"Today u start a trip,
Endeavour surreal things n grip.. "
I agree. Travel, laugh and have fun. Key to a good life. Thank you Randhir for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Randhir kaur]

Thank you so much Coyote...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed your work.

[Randhir kaur]

Peace to hear this dear poet..

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Randhir,
It's just Richard, come to peek in on your poetry, and I am not disappointed with what was found.
I really enjoy the way your keen mind works, the unique and original way your pen created this wise and entertaining piece.
It is true what you say about us being flexible and open to change, and through the brilliance of poetry you've most certainly made this example speak the new language, and I must refrain, too, that for every voice there is a proper place it best fits, and though I've thoroughly enjoyed how your voice has spoken it, text talk (and this is but my own feeling) has no place in poetry written in English, unless that poetry is as this piece is, written as a (sort of) satirical interest to emphasize how texting is effecting even the formal written language.
Heaven forbid it would squeeze its way into all languages, even where it does and never will belong, much as slang words all too often have.
Anyway, I love how you've gotten the point across to be open, but somethings should be used for their purpose and not misapplied where they don't fit well, such as text talk in good poetry … LOL!
I think, in the first line, you may have meant, "don't be reluctant", and in the second line, "Grab every moment, be persistent", unless I'm totally misunderstanding what you mean, and knowing me, that is certainly possible … LOL!

I really have enjoyed my first visit to your pages, Randhir.
Thanks a million for sharing your quaint skills, Dear Poetess … "U" are just great! ⁓ Richard ; )


110/100

[Randhir kaur]

Text-talk u r right Richard..Thank u for letting me know where to go..well letting u know about my write is just very simple but I won't judge..u know it very well than that of me..m not a poet but write because I love writing.. Thank u for ur review dear poet...

[Richard🖌]

How wonderfully enjoyable you've made it for me, Randhir … hugs to You! ⁓ RJ

[Randhir kaur]

Hugs too..Its wonderful to talk to you..

[Richard🖌]

I, too, enjoy you.

[Solar]

Happy New Year! A good poem about taking positive steps will be even better with less 'text-speak' of 'u', 'ur' etc - after all writing is about developing language too.

[Randhir kaur]

Thank u Solar,letting me know about my errors..

[Solar]

errors are minor - the poem was good

[Randhir kaur]

But for me dat was the error. I learn frm my mistakes..Many Thanx...Stay connected.

[Solar]

It's not an error - it was just my response. There is no reason why a poem cannot be written fully in text-speak. That would be interesting too.

[Randhir kaur]

Yeah..I absolutely get it..I guess u r unable to catch me..Anyways...I appreciate ur response..

[Solar]

I think I do catch 'u' - perhaps I feel language and vocabulary add to enjoyment and memorability.

[Randhir kaur]

O I see it.. :-)